I am learning to create an image in my mind, with a noun ( frost) depicting the weather at this time of year in Southland.
I am then learning to write a description for this image, using strong, appropriate and effective verbs to activate the nouns and one or two similes.
When I awake, it has appeared like a white cloud dropping instantly to the ground
It covers our paddocks like a thick fluffy blanket, sheep camouflaged instantly
Bright headlights of the cars shimmer through the blanket of white, instantly warning of their presence like a lighthouse guiding incoming boats
A once silver and black trampoline, merged with the wooden fence
Fog appearing, like a white cloud dropping instantly to the ground
Hi Elijah,
ReplyDeleteYou did a good blog post.
I liked the way you wrote “Bright headlights of the cars shimmer through the blanket of white, instantly warning of their presence like a lighthouse guiding incoming boats”
Maybe next time you should add why you chose to write that.
Did you enjoy writing that ?
Kind regards Ian.
Canterbury
Yaldhurst Model School.
hi ian,
Deletethank you for commenting to my blog. to answer you I enjoy writing my story and I hope you enjoy my latest blog post
Elijah
room4
sothlandnz