This weeks 100wc prompt was: What do I need now? I was focusing on: changing the opening of a sentence and to be level 4 on our punctuation ladder. Here is an image of it:
All right I am going to the the shop; let's go! I need to get prepared; there was Just a nuke (big gas bomb) warning!! I jump in my car and drive to the shop. No one is here… then as soon as I get in the shop I look behind me and in seconds the shop is flooding with people. As fast as a cheetah, diving through the crowd I snatch my food off the shelf. But what do I need now? Then suddenly I hear a jet flying over me… then I drive into my secret underground laboratory...
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