100wc

Today our success criteria was to right a 100 WC about a book we read. I chose to right about the book Once. I hope you read the book after you read my 100 WC good bye.

                                                   once

All i see is flames all around me  when I jump out I get knocked out I wake up and cry for my mum and dad  I look beside me and see a boy he said”go to sleep it will be a big day tomorrow we will find your mum and dad”. I go to sleep when I wake up I say”I need to pee and I want breakfast” he let me do a pee and have some water and bread he goes to see what the noise  is a machine gun is pointed at me so scary...

100wc

this week room 4 did a 100wc an are book we read I read once it was about the Nazi   

                                           once

I was running the flames were getting clearer I look if i can see people I can’t see anyone the fire is still miles away so I don’t think I would be able to see any yet when I got near the flames I a gunshots I see  people on the ground. I know if I put a feather near the nose it will move if there alife if not dead!!! I put the feather on the man's nose it does not move then when I put it on the woman's nose it doesn't move then i see a girl.

100wc: Now What Do I Need?

This weeks 100wc prompt was: What do I need now? I was focusing on: changing the opening of a sentence and to be level 4 on our punctuation ladder. Here is an image of it:

All right I am going to the the shop; let's go! I need to get prepared; there was Just a nuke (big gas bomb) warning!!  I jump in my car and drive to the shop. No one is here… then as soon as I get in the shop I look behind me and in seconds the shop is flooding with people. As fast as a cheetah, diving through the crowd I snatch my food off the shelf. But what do I need now? Then suddenly I hear a jet flying over me… then I drive into my secret underground laboratory...                          

100wc

This week's 100wc was that the weather changed dramatically. We have been leaning to use better words and semi-colons.

It was a great afternoon I just made my lunch; I  go to watch tv and I hear it will be sunny then I run outside and jumped off a cliff… into water. But meanwhile at my house they had a tornado warning!! Then when I get up in the morning I hear lightning and loud winds when I look out my window a big tree goes flying through my window… after I walked away to my storm shelter put when I walked past my tv and the weather told us that your storm shelter will not be enough…

Do you want to help people?

This week, 100 Word Challenge is working to raise attention of the work that VSO does in Sierra Leone helping pregnant women and their babies.

Dear Andrew,

I like that you always help no matter what. I am wondering what It must feel like if someone's life is depending on you? is it hard to do this nearly every day are you alone will doing this? Was it hard at first when it was Pitch dark  how much easier was it when you first got light? Where do you get your money to pay for your instructor and the $50 light? I would like to have your job saving people's life’s but it will also be very scared having peoples life depending on me .

Bye