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Showing posts with label fog. Show all posts
Showing posts with label fog. Show all posts

Wednesday, 16 August 2017

the fog

I am learning to create an image in my mind, with a noun ( frost)  depicting the weather at this time of year in Southland.
I am then learning to write a description for this image,  using strong, appropriate and effective verbs to activate the nouns and one or two similes.


When I awake, it has appeared  like a white cloud dropping instantly to the ground
It covers our paddocks like a thick fluffy blanket,  sheep  camouflaged instantly
Bright headlights of the cars shimmer through the blanket of white, instantly warning of their presence like a lighthouse  guiding incoming boats
A once silver and black trampoline, merged with the wooden fence

Fog appearing, like a white cloud dropping instantly to the ground